Great! Just one thing, use a hyphen (-) between «shoulder» and «length».

Picture? the order «long gray/grey straing hair» is incorrect. In addition, «straing» is not a valid word and «..
and She wearing» contains mistakes: one of them is related to the incorrect use of a Capital letter (mayúscula) when you write «She» and the other mistake is that the form of the present continuous is not complete (there is something missing).
Finally, in «she has big round brown (?) with long eyelashes» there is something missing (falta algo) between «brown» and «with».
I think you are describing picture 2. By the way, does she really have gray/grey hair?

Great! There are some silly mistakes:
You can’t use a Capital letter (mayúscula) when you write the second and third «She»
The spelling of «skim» is wrong.

Mistakes:
1. The form of the present continuous of «wear» is incomplete.
2.We can’t use the article «a» with «jeans» and «boots» because we use «a» with singular nouns and «jeans» and «boots» are plural nouns.
Tip (Consejo):
Your description is very simple. You just describe the colour. At A2 level you need to use between 2 o 3 adjectives before the piece of clothing.

Perfect!

Your description contains some mistakes:

-«meaddle age» is not written correctly.

-You tend to (tiendes a) omit «a» with singular clothes such as «suit», «shirt», «tie». Remember we use «a/an» with singular nouns and no article with plural nouns.

Would you mind (¿Te importaría…?)writing your description again without the mistakes mentioned above? (arriba)?

Nearly perfect! You forgot to use the article «a» with «tracksuit», that is, «He is wearing a long blue tracksuit and….»

A very complete description! You forgot to use «a» with «dress».

Apart from that, we can´t say «she hasn´t wrinkles». The verb «have» is made negative with «don’t/doesn´t», that is, «…and she doesn´t have wrinkles». Also, you could have said «..and she hasn´t got wrinkles». Remember «have» is not an auxiliary verb, so you can´t make the negative of «have» with «not». However, «have got» is an auxiliary verb, so we can make the negative of «have got» with «not.
I hope you understand my explanation.

-«stripeds» is not written correctly
-You forgot to use «a» with «top dress»
-«top dress» is not a valid word to refer to a piece of clothing. Anyway, the girl is wearing a dress.
-«On de middle of..» is not written correctly. Anyway, there is a common way to express that idea: «a sleeveless dress with a heart motif.
-One more thing: you added a lot of adjectives before the noun «top dress». We need to be careful with that because we can make unnecessary mistakes. There is an entry on the blog «Grammar: «order of adjectives» where I give some advice for clothes description. When you say: » She is wearing a short, red and white striped (horizontal and vertical stripeds) and sleeveless top dress», you are using 3 adjectives: length – pattern (describing the colour of the pattern) – style.

I recommend using this order: «size or length» + colour + pattern or style. You used in your sentence both «pattern» and «style» Therefore, you made a mistake. If you want to add «pattern» and «style», the order changes:

e.g. a short sleeveless (style first) red and white striped (colour of the pattern and pattern) dress. (option 1)
e.g. a short red and white striped dress without sleeves. (option 2)

My advice in order to avoid mistakes is that you use «pattern» or «style». If despite my advice you want to use both «pattern» and «style», remember that you need to follow another order.

Hello,
Regarding your first sentence «she has long, straight and swept back on ponytail hair», first we say «swept back in a ponytail». I would have not used «swept back in a ponytail» as an adjective before «hair». Therefore, the natural sentence would have been «she has long straight and black hair (which is) swept back in a ponytail or «she has long, straight and back hair in a swept-back ponytail» because «swept back» makes reference to «ponytail» and not to «hair».

You described hair and complexion correctly. However, you didn´t describe «face».

A complete description! just one thing, with respect to the last sentence «She is wearing a small red and black check strap dress with square neck. You wrote a lot of adjectives before the noun. I would have written «She is wearing a small red back check dress with straps and square neck.

Just modify the spelling of «jacked». By the way, jackets have long sleeves. Therefore, I would have used «long-sleeve» with «shirt» rather than with «jacket». One more thing, you forgot «a» with «jacket».

Mistakes to be corrected:
-Use a hyphen (-) between «shoulder» and «length».
-Incorrect spelling of «lenght»
-Omission of «an» before «oval face»
-Omission of «subject» and a part of the present continuous tense in «and (?) wearing..»
-Incorrect spelling of «sleveless» and «cheked«

Great! Just remember the position of «too» in the sentence, end position. Here is a link with information about it

Very good! Just one thing: we just say «He is an adult» as (ya que) «adult» is also a noun.

Mistakes to be corrected:
-Check how to say «salir a correr» (use an online dictionary such as «Wordreference»). If you describe what he is doing, you have to use «present continuous».
-the fact that (el hecho de que) the man appears agile is not a reason to say that «el esta saliendo a correr». Just omit «because», use a full stop (.) instead. Then continue with «He appears agile…»
-«largue» doesn’t exist
-Correct the spelling of «eyesbrows»
-Use a comma after «Lastly»
-Change «tell» for «say» («Tell» usually has a person as the object and often has two objects: «Have you told him the news yet?»)
-the tense of «wear» is incorrect. Remember you are describing clothes and the tense used to describe is «present continuous».

Great! Just add a hyphen between «long» and «sleeve» and correct the spelling of «witch»

Good! just replace «with» with «in» because the expression is «wear your/my/her/etc. hair in a ponytail/braid». Finally, correct the spelling of «rond».

Hello Victoria,

Here are some mistakes to be corrected:

PICTURE 3: She has got around, dark skin.

PICTURE 4: She´s wearing (?) white t-shirt and blue trouser.

PICTURE 6: He has a sun tanned complexion and (?)smart, nead clothes.

PICTURE 7: He´s wearing sportwear

PICTURE 8.- She has got long, straigth and blond hair. She´s almond, blue ees and clear skin. She has got smart, nead clothes. She has got a red and black check dress.

PICTURE 9. She´s slim (?) tall. ……and heart glasses > heart-shaped glasses

CORRECTIONS

(?) means there is something missing ( (?) significa que falta algo)

Remember we use «wear» in the present continuous to describe the clothes a person is wearing.

Some words are incorrectly spelt (trouser, sportwear, nead, ees, straigth)