{"id":881,"date":"2020-11-12T16:23:36","date_gmt":"2020-11-12T16:23:36","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blogsaverroes.juntadeandalucia.es\/roadtoenglisha1\/?p=881"},"modified":"2020-11-22T19:42:24","modified_gmt":"2020-11-22T19:42:24","slug":"writing-my-best-friends-routine-sample","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/blogsaverroes.juntadeandalucia.es\/roadtoenglisha1\/2020\/11\/12\/writing-my-best-friends-routine-sample\/","title":{"rendered":"Writing: \u00abMy best friend\u00b4s routine\u00bb (Sample)"},"content":{"rendered":"

Here is a sample of a good A2 writing written by D\u00e9bora Camara. It contains mistakes, but in general terms it is a good writing taking into account that (teniendo en cuenta que) we are at the beginning of the course. In addition, she risks and she refuses to write a simple routine writing in which she would probably have made fewer mistakes (menos errores).Would you like to try to correct the mistakes made in this writing? If so, choose something highlighted in bold (resaltado en negrita<\/strong>) and try to correct it leaving a comment. <\/p>\n

                                                                    ROUTINE MY BEST FRIEND<\/strong><\/p>\n

I am going to talk (already corrected)<\/strong> about routine my best friend<\/strong> (already corrected)<\/strong> on Friday. <\/p>\n

My best friend is Marta,<\/strong>  s<\/strong>he (already corrected)<\/strong> is a lawyer and she works from Monday to Thursday and she has a duty day<\/strong> (already corrected)<\/strong> on Friday, so she says her favourite day of the week is Friday. <\/p>\n

Every Friday she gets up early at about six o’clock, [she takes her dog and she likes running until eight o’clock<\/strong>.] (already corrected)<\/strong> When she arrives home, first she has a shower, brushes her teeth, combs her hair and put on make up. Then, she goes to the kitchen to has<\/strong> (already corrected)<\/strong> breakfast, she usually has a cup of te (already corrected)<\/strong> and lots fruits (already corrected)<\/strong> because she doesn\u00b4t like coffee, b<\/strong>esides (?) (already corrected)<\/strong> she has a health (already corrected) <\/strong>life. <\/p>\n

After breakfast, she wears jeans, (?) (already corrected)<\/strong> T-shirt  , and sneakers because she likes sport (already corrected)<\/strong> clothes. She wears (?) (already corrected)<\/strong> suit and high heeded<\/strong> (already corrected)<\/strong> shoes from Monday to Thursdays (already corrected)<\/strong>. <\/p>\n

In the afternoon, she meets her boyfriend and she takes photos of the monuments and she up<\/strong> (already corrected)<\/strong> on f<\/strong>acebook. In the evening when she get (already corrected)<\/strong>  home, she is very tired and<\/strong> she make call phone (already corrected)<\/strong> her sister and watches TV,<\/strong> until she falls asleep for seven hours (already corrected)<\/strong>. <\/p>\n

To conclude, I think Marta has a very tired<\/strong> and stressed (already corrected)<\/strong> routine, but she loves it.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

Here is a sample of a good A2 writing written by D\u00e9bora Camara. It contains mistakes, but in general terms it is a good writing taking into account that (teniendo en cuenta que) we...<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1595,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"ngg_post_thumbnail":0,"footnotes":""},"categories":[75869],"tags":[],"aioseo_notices":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogsaverroes.juntadeandalucia.es\/roadtoenglisha1\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/881"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogsaverroes.juntadeandalucia.es\/roadtoenglisha1\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogsaverroes.juntadeandalucia.es\/roadtoenglisha1\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogsaverroes.juntadeandalucia.es\/roadtoenglisha1\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1595"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogsaverroes.juntadeandalucia.es\/roadtoenglisha1\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=881"}],"version-history":[{"count":7,"href":"https:\/\/blogsaverroes.juntadeandalucia.es\/roadtoenglisha1\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/881\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":979,"href":"https:\/\/blogsaverroes.juntadeandalucia.es\/roadtoenglisha1\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/881\/revisions\/979"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogsaverroes.juntadeandalucia.es\/roadtoenglisha1\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=881"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogsaverroes.juntadeandalucia.es\/roadtoenglisha1\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=881"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogsaverroes.juntadeandalucia.es\/roadtoenglisha1\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=881"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}