Monologue Example (First Impressions)
Hello,
Here is a monologue I shared with you on the blog last November. I asked you to leave a comment about her speech (in relation to the grammar and vocabulary of the level used, possible grammar and vocabulary mistakes, connectors, pronunciation mistakes, fluency, etc.), yet nobody left a comment. Now it is a good time to do it.
To me, the monologue seems fine and with a correct level. It’s also well structured. Nevertheless, saying for instance that Trump undermines people maybe is too concrete and it should need a second impression.